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I guess everywhere has their unique culture. We have also.
I descrebe here, especially, our wedding culture.
As I told you the phone, man and women fall in love and decide wedding each other, we have some problems.
The most biggest problem is a house where is very expensive. For example, if you want to live in Seoul, especially apartment, you should pay 130,000 USD at least. It's the only lent not buy and older apartment case and the size is 79 m2. If you want to live near on the subway, bus station or shopping center, more big size, the price is much more high.
At this point, the pay (lent or buy) is in charge of the man or his parents. That's the why the man getting marrige age is more later. If we have a job, we have to saving the money for lent or buy a house.
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Happy Friday, [이름]!
Wow! Getting married in Korea will really cost you... literally! Now I know the reason why most men would rather focus on their careers first than settling down. I think it\'s a good idea that they save money first before getting married so they won\'t have any problems financially in the future. In your case, I think you\'re lucky because you\'re parents helped and supported you all the way. Anyway, I have made the corrections below. I would advice you to be more careful with your spellng next time, okay? Well, take care and have a wonderful weekend!
I guess everywhere has their unique culture. We have also.
>>I guess every country has their unique culture, we have it also.I descrebe here, especially, our wedding culture.
>> I will describe here Korea\'s wedding culture.As I told you the phone, man and women fall in love and decide wedding each other, we have some problems.
>>As I told you over the phone, men and women fall in love and decide to marry each other, then eventually they will encounter some problems.The most biggest problem is a house where is very expensive.
>>The biggest problem they will be having is purchasing a house which is very expensive.
For example, if you want to live in Seoul, especially apartment, you should pay 130,000 USD at least.
>>For example, if you want to live in Seoul, especially in an apartment, you should pay 130,000 USD at least.
It\'s the only lent not buy and older apartment case and the size is 79 m2.
>>It\'s only about renting and not owning one. An old apartment is 79 square meters.
If you want to live near on the subway, bus station or shopping center, more big size, the price is much more high.
>>If you want to live near the subway, the bus station or the shopping center, with a larger apartment size, the price would be higher/ more expensive.At this point, the pay (lent or buy) is in charge of the man or his parents.
>>At this point, the pay (rented or owned) is done by the man or his parents.
That\'s the why the man getting marrige age is more later.
>>That\'s why most men get married at a later age.
If we have a job, we have to saving the money for lent or buy a house.
>> If we have a job, we have to save money for rent or to buy a house.
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