Homework

2012-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Michelle

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Complete the sentence: 1. I am a office worker_______________.[Ex: I am kind] 2. I like to swing in the pool.____________________. 3. When I am sad I always watch movie._____________________. 4. I've learn that it's hard to make a friend._____________. 5. People that don't know me think I'm rich._______________. 6. People know me ______________________. 7. People don't know that time is precious._____________________. 8. I admire the old_____________. 9. My strengths is open-minded___________. 10. One of my weaknesses is bad stamina________________.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] Oh, ^^I am so glad you find time in your busy schedule to do the homework. Thank you so much for sharing wonderful information about you. Aim high and believe in yourself and you will get to where you want to go. Don\'t be afraid to surprise yourself! Have a wonderful evening ahead! T. Michelle :) HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Complete the sentence:1. I am a office worker_______________.[Ex: I am kind] >>> I am an office worker.2. I like to swing in the pool.____________________. >>> Correct3. When I am sad I always watch movie._____________________. >>> Correct ^^ >>> OR: When I am sad I always watch movies.4. I\'ve learn that it\'s hard to make a friend._____________. >>> Correct5. People that don\'t know me think I\'m rich._______________. >>> Correct6. People know me ______________________. >>> People know me as a kind person.7. People don\'t know that time is precious._____________________. >>> Correct8. I admire the old_____________. >>> Correct >>> OR: I admire the old people.9. My strengths is open-minded___________. >>> My strenthgs is having an open mind.10. One of my weaknesses is bad stamina________________. >>> Correct

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