Homework (184)
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1. Have you ever felt out of place? What did you do?
I have felt out of place when I was in the 1st grade. So I tried to talk with my classmates for that time, but I kept failing.
2. Do you want friends who are similar to or different from you?
I want friends who are similar, but friends that has different personality from me is also OK.
3. How do you usually make new friends?
I try to talk with my classmates for making my friends.
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I have felt out of place when I was in the 1st grade.
>>CORRECT
So I tried to talk with my classmates for that time, but I kept failing.
>>So I tried to talk with my classmates at that time but I kept failing.
>>So I tried to talk with my classmates at that time but I kept failing.
I want friends who are similar, but friends that has different personality from me is also OK.
>>I want friends who are similar but friend that has different personalities from me is also okay.
I try to talk with my classmates for making my friends.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I try to talk with my classmates to make friends.
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