homework~

hello, Louice. :) Did you enjoy your last weekend?? I hope that you head good time for last weekend. anyway, can you please check my homework? A few month ago I went to outside swimming pool with may friend. I enjoyed riding a water slide with my friend. And we ate barbecue together. It was very delicious . After eating it, i and may friend played the game with a water ball. It was a simple game but it was enjoyed for us because there are many friend . I never forgot that time .

Hi there, Iris!

Thank you for sending over your composition. Anyway, yes, I really enjoyed my weekend. I spent my time with my boyfriend because he's about to leave today. About your homework, I enjoyed reading it. I think you really had a great time. See you later! Take care.

-Louise-

hello, Louice. :)

>> Hello, Louise. :)

 Did you enjoy your last weekend??

>> Correct.

 I hope that you head good time for last weekend.

>> I hope that you had good time last weekend.

anyway, can you please check my homework?

>> Correct. Just make sure you capitalize the letter 'a' for the word 'anyway'.

>> Anyway, can you please check my homework?

 A few month ago I went to outside swimming pool with may friend.

>> A few months ago, I went to a resort with my friend.

 I enjoyed riding a water slide with my friend.

>> I enjoyed sliding there with her.

 And we ate barbecue together.

>> We also ate barbeque.

It was very delicious .

>> Correct. Just make sure the punctuation mark is place right after the last letter of the last word.

After eating it, i and may friend played the game with a water ball.

>> After eating, my friend and I played a water game.

 It was a simple game but it was enjoyed for us because there are many friend .

>> It was a simple game but I enjoyed it because my friend was there.

 I never forgot that time .

>> I will never forget that time.