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If you have not a baby it's ok for divorce but, if you have a baby or some children, I really don't agree divorce any of reason.
It's too affected by their kids mental. I heard if you were divorce, more than 50% their kids they will have a hated and lonely for parents and society. I guess it's the basis for murder or any strong bad behavior.
Love is very important for people because people can't live alone. It should be much enough between parents or their friends.
If people have enough feel about it, I'm sure the accidents like murder are much more downsizing.
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Good morning [이름]!
I couldn\'t agree with you more regarding your opinion on divorce. It really has bad effects for the kids, although, I think some parents may not be well aware of it. I think it would be better to think about the consequences before deciding on settling down to avoid filling for divorce in the future. Well, again, I would like to commend you for being open minded about our topic for today. Thank you for being so accommodating.I\'ll talk to you tomorrow in class. Take care and have a great day!
If you have not a baby it\'s ok for divorce but, if you have a baby or some children, I really don\'t agree divorce any of reason.
>>If you don\'t have a baby, then it\'s okay to file for divorce but if you do or if you have children, I really don\'t agree that people should file for divorce for the following reasons:
It\'s too affected by their kids mental.
>>It will affect the kids mentally.
I heard if you were divorce, more than 50% their kids they will have a hated and lonely for parents and society.
>>I heard that if there is a divorce case in the household, more than 50 % of those family\'s kids will grow hating their parents, or they tend to become loners in the society.
I guess it\'s the basis for murder or any strong bad behavior.
>>I guess it is the basis for murder or the cause of any bad behaviors.Love is very important for people because people can\'t live alone.
>>CORRECT!
It should be much enough between parents or their friends.
>>They would be satisfied getting that from their parents and friends.If people have enough feel about it, I\'m sure the accidents like murder are much more downsizing.
>>If people become aware about this, I\'m sure the incidents of murder and such will downsize.
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