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I don't know which country allows child can soldier. I guess maybe it would be allowed by some poor country or trouble area. Since it was one of the method made money or if you live in trouble area, you should be go to army by law.
Anyway, I don't agree child can soldier. Because if they attend to war, they must be killed enermy or see people diying. It's terrible experience and will be bad affected by them I think.
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Hi there! What you have said is so true! A child must not be a part of war and should not witness the violence around him. Children must be protected from experiencing such kind of situation. ^^ Anyway, thank you for making your homework today. It was well done. Just be careful with your grammar. ^^ Happy Thursday! ^^^
~T. Ritchel
I don\'t know which country allows child can soldier.
>>I don\'t know any country allowing a child to be a soldier.
I guess maybe it would be allowed by some poor country or trouble area.
>>I guess it would be allowed by some poor countries and those troubled area/s.
Since it was one of the method made money or if you live in trouble area, you should be go to army by law.
>They can make money out of it. In troubled area, it is compoulsory to send a child according to law.Anyway, I don\'t agree child can soldier.
>>Anyway, I do not agree that a child can become a soldier.
Because if they attend to war, they must be killed enermy or see people diying.
>>They might be killed by the enemy and will see people dying if they go to war.
It\'s terrible experience and will be bad affected by them I think.
>>It\'s a terrible experience and I think it will affect them badly.
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