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2012-09-10 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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On this tuesday to thursday, i will go to my part time job and after working, i will talk with Camille using english . So what i have to prepare is to take a enough sleep to working. Because part time job requires lots of physical streghth. Another preparation is to study english for talking. I think speaking english is the most difficult part of studying english. It means listening, reading, writting english is easier than speaking. that is the thing most of Korean students may feeling. Because in Korea english study step is pointed on reading and listening. As speaking is difficult, studying ahead and repeat is important. On friday i will not go to work and take a rest including take a nap and apply for abroad university to get acception for visit student. On weekend i'll go to part time job again. I hate going part time job but cannot help going because i want to earn allowance that i'll spend in america. Living in america needs lots of money and i wanna lift parents' burden at least by earing pocket money myself. On the other hand, i often thought studying english more is better than earning my allowence.

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Hello my dear, Thank you so much for making your homework today.. JOb well done as always baby and I commend you for a job well done.. Cant wait to talk to you again tomorrow and have a good night. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ On this tuesday to thursday, i will go to my part time job and after working, i will talk with Camille using english . >>correct..Observe proper capitalization of PROPER NOUNS So what i have to prepare is to take a enough sleep to working. >>So I have to prepare in going to work by having enough sleep. Because part time job requires lots of physical streghth. >>correct Another preparation is to study english for talking. >>correct I think speaking english is the most difficult part of studying english. >>correct It means listening, reading, writting english is easier than speaking. >>correct that is the thing most of Korean students may feeling. >>That is the thing most Korean students may be feeling. Because in Korea english study step is pointed on reading and listening. >>Because in Korea, studying English is pointed out on reading and listening. As speaking is difficult, studying ahead and repeat is important. >>As speaking is difficult, studying ahead and repeating as well is important.On friday i will not go to work and take a rest including take a nap and apply for abroad university to get acception for visit student. >>On Friday, I will not go to work. I will just take a rest including taking a nap and applyig abroad as an exchange student. On weekend i\'ll go to part time job again. >>correct I hate going part time job but cannot help going because i want to earn allowance that i\'ll spend in america. >>I hate going to my part time job but I cant help but to go to earn my allowance that I will spend in America.  Living in america needs lots of money and i wanna lift parents\' burden at least by earing pocket money myself. >>correct..Observe proper spealling. EARNINGOn the other hand, i often thought studying english more is better than earning my allowence. >>correct..Observe proper spealling. ALLOWANCE  

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