Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. He didn't earn enough money. (therefore), his wife decided to get a job.
2. That house isn't big enough for us, and (furthermore), it's too expensive.
3. We have plenty of money and workers; (thus), we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.
4. She's extremely rich; (however), she's not snobbish.
5. It was a windy and rainy night. (nevertheless), I decided to go out.
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Hello, Kelly!
It's fine whether.
I like cloudless blue sky.
The fall is coming!
I like cold whether and I love the fall and winter.
What do you like the season?
Day by day, I was funny study English.
Have a nice on Tuseday.
Bye.
From: Emily.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for doing your homework. Just keep it up! I want to share to you an Indian message. \"Tell me and I will forget,Show me and I will learn,Involve me and I will understand\"Involvement is the key to understanding. take care always!
-T.Kelly
1. He didn\'t earn enough money. (therefore), his wife decided to get a job.
>> Correct!2. That house isn\'t big enough for us, and (furthermore), it\'s too expensive.>>hence3. We have plenty of money and workers; (thus), we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.>> nevertheless4. She\'s extremely rich; (however), she\'s not snobbish.>> Correct!5. It was a windy and rainy night. (nevertheless), I decided to go out.
>> Correct!------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hello, Kelly!
>> Correct!It\'s fine whether.
>> We have a fine weather!
>> The weather is fine.I like cloudless blue sky.
>> I like cloudy blue sky.The fall is coming!
>> Fall is coming.I like cold whether and I love the fall and winter.
>>I like cold weather and I love fall and winter. What do you like the season?
>> What season do you like?Day by day, I was funny study English.
>> I am enjoying my english lesson everyday.Have a nice on Tuseday.
>> Have a nice Tuesday!Bye.>> Correct!From: Emily.
>> Correct!
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