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2012-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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1. He didn't earn enough money. (therefore), his wife decided to get a job. 2. That house isn't big enough for us, and (furthermore), it's too expensive. 3. We have plenty of money and workers; (thus), we hope to finish the house remodeling soon. 4. She's extremely rich; (however), she's not snobbish. 5. It was a windy and rainy night. (nevertheless), I decided to go out. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hello, Kelly! It's fine whether. I like cloudless blue sky. The fall is coming! I like cold whether and I love the fall and winter. What do you like the season? Day by day, I was funny study English. Have a nice on Tuseday. Bye. From: Emily.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for  doing your homework. Just keep it up! I want to share to you an Indian message. \"Tell me and I will forget,Show me and I will learn,Involve me and I will understand\"Involvement is the key to understanding. take care always! -T.Kelly 1. He didn\'t earn enough money. (therefore), his wife decided to get a job. >> Correct!2. That house isn\'t big enough for us, and (furthermore), it\'s too expensive.>>hence3. We have plenty of money and workers; (thus), we hope to finish the house remodeling soon.>> nevertheless4. She\'s extremely rich; (however), she\'s not snobbish.>> Correct!5. It was a windy and rainy night. (nevertheless), I decided to go out. >> Correct!------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hello, Kelly! >> Correct!It\'s fine whether. >> We have a fine weather! >> The weather is fine.I like cloudless blue sky. >> I like cloudy blue sky.The fall is coming! >> Fall is coming.I like cold whether and I love the fall and winter. >>I like cold weather and I love fall and winter. What do you like the season? >> What season do you like?Day by day, I was funny study English. >> I am enjoying my english lesson everyday.Have a nice on Tuseday. >> Have a nice Tuesday!Bye.>> Correct!From: Emily. >> Correct!

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