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2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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10years ago, most of worker should go to their company on saturday. But, these days most of worker don't go. I think guarantee which takes a rest with family, friends and hobby is the most important for ideal weekend.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름]! Good morning! Thank you so much for doing your essay. It was brief but you were able to express your idea well. Take care and I\'ll talk to you in class again tomorrow! 10years ago, most of worker should go to their company on saturday. >> 10 years ago, most employees are supposed to go to their companies on Saturdays. But, these days most of worker don\'t go. >>These days most employees don\'t go to work on the weekends. I think guarantee which takes a rest with family, friends and hobby is the most important for ideal weekend. >>I think being guaranteed to take a rest with one\'s family or friens or doing one\'s hobby is the most important to having an ideal weekend.

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