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2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Germany where started World War II is now applogizes their past like war, Nazi. It's respectable. But Japan is opposite the Germany. They don't agree their fault, history which even revise the history and books. That's unfair. Historically, Dokdo island is ours. So many documents show about it. Some professor who is Japaneses confirms by old documents that Dokdo island is Korea's. Japan should stop so ugly behavior.

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Good morning, [이름]! I think what the Japanese are doing to your country is not fair. They are trying to take over something that doesn\'t belong to them in the first place. They should be more considerate about this matter. Thank you so much for expressing your thoughts and opinions. Have a great day! Germany where started World War II is now applogizes their past like war, Nazi. >> Germany, where the World War II started is now apologizing for what happened in the past, like the war and the Nazi\'s. It\'s respectable. >>CORRECT! But Japan is opposite the Germany. >>But Japan is the opposite of Germany. They don\'t agree their fault, history which even revise the history and books. >>They don\'t agree that it was their fault, they are even trying to revise the books and retell history. That\'s unfair. >>CORRECT!Historically, Dokdo island is ours. >>CORRECT! So many documents show about it. >>There are a lots of documents to prove it. Some professor who is Japaneses confirms by old documents that Dokdo island is Korea\'s. >>Some professors who are Japanese confirms it by showing old documents Japan should stop so ugly behavior. >>Japan should stop their ugly behavior.

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