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2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

학생이 쓴 원문

1.him 2.him 3.him 4.him 5.them p.s : teacher Lala ^^ no.3 and no.4 are same questions... Neighbors They are 5 members of famiiy. They have two sons and a grandma. Two son tend to ride a bike with their father.And one of them like to study in school. We became neighbors since 2002. They are getting familiar each other . Probably,i know 3 family. It depens on situatin. Some people like to be friedly with thier neighbors another people just like to be bow each other. Regularly we should have a gathering. So we can improve our neighborhood.

강사 첨삭

'Learn something new every day under the sun. You will never get old if you do.' ~Lois Bey Take care Winnie. Talk to you on Monday then. Teacher Lara Here are my corrcetions for you: 1.him >> Correct2.him >> Correct3.him >> her4.him >> her5.them >> Correctp.s : teacher Lala ^^ no.3 and no.4 are same questions...>> P.S: Teacher Lara, nos. 3 and 4 have the same question.Neighbors>> CorrectThey are 5 members of famiiy. They have two sons and a grandma.>> They have 5 members in their family. They have 2 sons and a grandmother.Two son tend to ride a bike with their father.And one of them like to study in school.>> Their 2 sons tend to ride a bike with their father and one of them like to study in school.We became neighbors since 2002.>> CorrectThey are getting familiar each other .>> They are becoming familiar with each other.Probably,i know 3 family.>> I probably know 3 members of their family.It depens on situatin. >> It depends on the situation. Some people like to be friedly with thier neighbors another people just like to be bow each other.>> CorrectRegularly we should have a gathering. So we can improve our neighborhood. >>  Correct

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