Homework 19

ESSAY: Do you think betting on sports should be illegal? Yes, I think betting on sports should be illegal, because it is also one of the gambling. Many people want to be rich without the effort by doing gambling and it became serious problem in society. People who bet on sports can become rich but also can become poor in a second. Then the family whose property has gone would be very hard to keep their life. Therefore, to protect family in a country, betting on sports should be illegal.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Some things must really be controlled in a country to promote discipline. It\'s never just about the money or making business but people would know the value of money of they work hard and not just being rich in an instant!^^ T,Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: Yes, I think betting on sports should be illegal, because it is also one of the gambling. >>  CORRECT OR> Betting on sports must be considered because it is also a form of gambling.  Many people want to be rich without the effort by doing gambling and it became serious problem in society. >> CORRECT OR> A lot of people would want to gain fortune without making efforts and it has developed as a social problem.People who bet on sports can become rich but also can become poor in a second. >> CORRECT Or> People can bet and earn a fortune but would also lose in a blink of an eye. Then the family whose property has gone would be very hard to keep their life. >> Then the family whose property has been lost would be very challenged to keep their life. Therefore, to protect family in a country, betting on sports should be illegal. >> Therefore, to protect a family in a country, betting on sports should be illegal.