homework 19

2016-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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What do you wish you had tried or done when you were younger? Why? when i'm younger, i used to visit a car expo. and i memorize a lot of car names. I wanted to memorize a car names as much as possible. there was not reason. mabe it was just interested to me. however, i don't know car's name so much now. because, because it became reduced to visit a car expo.

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Hi my dear Sun!!Great job today! I hope you will keep up the good work... Take care and have a good day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ What do you wish you had tried or done when you were younger? Why?when i\'m younger, i used to visit a car expo. >>When I was younger, I used to visit a car expo. and i memorize a lot of car names.>>And I memorized a lot of car names.I wanted to memorize a car names as much as possible. >>correct there was not reason.>>There was no reason.mabe it was just interested to me. >>Maybe it was just interesting.however, i don\'t know car\'s name so much now. >>However, I already forgot the name of the car. because, because it became reduced to visit a car expo. >>I no longer have enough time to go to a car expo.

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