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2012-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi Camille :) today's talking was a little dizzy. i am sorry for this. and before doing homework, i wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respect other people is important although i don't like someone's action. i think you might talk about my offensive word to my boyfreind. first i want to say we were(and are) okay. everyday he had a jokking or fooling me first and after i pretend to angry. if i have a jokking, he vice versa. In usual, jokking, fooling and pretend to annoying is one of our funny talking style. Maybe i think he enjoys my big reactions. but i admit today had a little excession because i wanna talk to you but he say something and made me distracted. haha And now i'm going to start my homework you gave to me. When we meet someday, i think i will say "Are you a really Camille?" first, and say "nice to meet you" with hugging. It seems like very commonplace, but i'll say like this in the actual. hahaha ps. i wrote this yesterday, but i didn't uproad it.

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Hello my dear good evening, Im so sorry about that. I didn\'t intend to think that way, I\'m really sorry my dear. But thank you for the explanation you gave me for that,kkk.. Anyway, I also have one request if its okay my dear.. When we see each other will it be okay if you sing and dance PSY\'s song entitled Gangnam style? I really like that!!kkk.. ANd maybe together we can do that hehehe.. Good night baby.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hi Camille :) today\'s talking was a little dizzy. >>HI Camille, today\'s conversation was little confusing. i am sorry for this. >>correct and before doing homework, i wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respect other people is important although i don\'t like someone\'s action. >>And before doing my homework I wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respecting other people is important though I dont like other people\'s action.  i think you might talk about my offensive word to my boyfreind. >>correct first i want to say we were(and are) okay. >>correct everyday he had a jokking or fooling me first and after i pretend to angry. >>Everyday he makes a joke and at first I pretend to get mad. if i have a jokking, he vice versa. >>And if I make a joke, he too will get mad. In usual, jokking, fooling and pretend to annoying is one of our funny talking style. >>In most cases, making some jokes and pretending is one of the ways to make a good conversation. Maybe i think he enjoys my big reactions.but i admit today had a little excession because i wanna talk to you but he say something and made me distracted. haha >>correctAnd now i\'m going to start my homework you gave to me. >>correct When we meet someday, i think i will say \"Are you a really Camille?\" first, and say \"nice to meet you\" with hugging. >>correct It seems like very commonplace, but i\'ll say like this in the actual. >>It seems very usual but I will do this when I meet you. hahaha and i wrote this yesterday, but i dn\'t uproad it. >>I wrote this yesterday but I didnt upload it.

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