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Hi Camille :) today's talking was a little dizzy. i am sorry for this. and before doing homework, i wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respect other people is important although i don't like someone's action. i think you might talk about my offensive word to my boyfreind. first i want to say we were(and are) okay. everyday he had a jokking or fooling me first and after i pretend to angry. if i have a jokking, he vice versa. In usual, jokking, fooling and pretend to annoying is one of our funny talking style. Maybe i think he enjoys my big reactions. but i admit today had a little excession because i wanna talk to you but he say something and made me distracted. haha
And now i'm going to start my homework you gave to me. When we meet someday, i think i will say "Are you a really Camille?" first, and say "nice to meet you" with hugging. It seems like very commonplace, but i'll say like this in the actual. hahaha
ps. i wrote this yesterday, but i didn't uproad it.
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Hello my dear good evening,
Im so sorry about that. I didn\'t intend to think that way, I\'m really sorry my dear.
But thank you for the explanation you gave me for that,kkk..
Anyway, I also have one request if its okay my dear..
When we see each other will it be okay if you sing and dance PSY\'s song entitled Gangnam style? I really like that!!kkk..
ANd maybe together we can do that hehehe..
Good night baby..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hi Camille :) today\'s talking was a little dizzy.
>>HI Camille, today\'s conversation was little confusing.
i am sorry for this.
>>correct
and before doing homework, i wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respect other people is important although i don\'t like someone\'s action.
>>And before doing my homework I wanna talk about the feedback you wrote that respecting other people is important though I dont like other people\'s action.
i think you might talk about my offensive word to my boyfreind.
>>correct
first i want to say we were(and are) okay.
>>correct
everyday he had a jokking or fooling me first and after i pretend to angry.
>>Everyday he makes a joke and at first I pretend to get mad.
if i have a jokking, he vice versa.
>>And if I make a joke, he too will get mad.
In usual, jokking, fooling and pretend to annoying is one of our funny talking style.
>>In most cases, making some jokes and pretending is one of the ways to make a good conversation.
Maybe i think he enjoys my big reactions.but i admit today had a little excession because i wanna talk to you but he say something and made me distracted. haha
>>correctAnd now i\'m going to start my homework you gave to me.
>>correct
When we meet someday, i think i will say \"Are you a really Camille?\" first, and say \"nice to meet you\" with hugging.
>>correct
It seems like very commonplace, but i\'ll say like this in the actual.
>>It seems very usual but I will do this when I meet you.
hahaha and i wrote this yesterday, but i dn\'t uproad it.
>>I wrote this yesterday but I didnt upload it.
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