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2012-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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If we can meet someday in the future, what's the first thing that you'll tell me? If we can meet someday in the future, I will tell my thanks to you. Actually, I feel a growing sense of unease before you called me But, after I finished our conversation with you. I feel look rested and relaxed and I am full of energy. You are a good woman for me. Therefore, If we can meet someday in the future, I will give my present to you than my words. I always thank you.

강사 첨삭

  Hello there Miss [이름]!!!! That was a very heart-warming composition.. Thanks! It\'s nice to know that you feel comfortable talking with me..   Anyway, You did a great job! However, please be very careful with the tenses of your sentences especially those in the past. Keep practicing and always be positive!!! You can do it!!!   Have  a nice day~~~ ^^   xoxoTeacher Cam-   If we can meet someday in the future, what\'s the first thing that you\'ll tell me? If we can meet someday in the future, I will tell my thanks to you. >>> If we can meet someday in the future, I will say Thanks to you.Actually, >>> CORRECT!!! I feel a growing sense of unease before you called me >>> I felt a little uneasy before you called me.But, after I finished our conversation with you.>>> But after our conversation.I feel look rested and relaxed and I am full of energy. >>> I felt calm, relaxed and full of energy.You are a good woman for me.>>> CORRECT!!>>> I think you\'re a good woman.Therefore, >>> CORRECT!!If we can meet someday in the future, >>> CORRECTI will give my present to you than my words.>>> I will give you present which are my words saying,I always thank you. >>> I\'m always thankful to you.

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