Homework

Make a paragraph about the things that you will do in preparation for the very busy week. Make atleast 6 sentences about this. Actually, I lived the very busy life. 6 years ago, I had two- job. The first is an officer worker and second I operated my business. I worked all day long. By the way, my son was sick. So I had to decide closing my life for my son. I naver regreted my choice and I decided that there was not the very busy day of my life. But, the years went. My son is better than before and I have my daughter. I pondered a homework.

A happy day to both of us...!! I really appreciate that you pondered upon this composition. It was a very inspirational one. I was moved!! It  was  very substantial. However, the question was about your preparation for a very busy week..   Anyway, for your areas of improvement, kindly check on your spellings as well as the use of your articles. Also, please do not use numbers if it is use at the beginning of the sentence. You should complete it.   Other than those, this  composition is a good one!!! Keep doing your best... Have a nice day and stay safe always.. xoxoTeacher Cam-   Make a paragraph about the things that you will do in preparation for the very busy week. Make atleast 6 sentences about this. Actually, I lived the very busy life. >>>> Actually, I lived a very busy life.6 years ago, I had two- job.>>>> Six years ago, I had two jobs. The first is an officer worker and second I operated my business. >>>> First, I was an office worker and second, I managed my own business.I worked all day long.>>>> CORRECT!!!!By the way, my son was sick.>>>> CORRECT!!!So I had to decide closing my life for my son.>>>> So I decided to end my career for my son.I naver regreted my choice and >>>> I never regret my choice andI decided that there was not the very busy day of my life.>>>> I decided that I won\'t be very busy all day of my life.But, the years went. My son is better than before and I have my daughter. >>>> The years went by, now, my son is better than before and I have my daughter.I pondered a homework. >>>> I pondered when I made this homework.