[Homework]190512
학생이 쓴 원문
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I generally agree with the animal experiment except some brutal cases.
>>> I generally agree with the animal experiment except for some brutal cases.
I think generally It helps people investigate biological phenomena that can not be experimented with human such as genetics.
>>> correct
The biological understandings are very important for people to prevent diseases and develop medicines.
>>> correct
Naturally, experimenting on dogs or cats seems to be wrong.
>>> correct
But what about monkeys, mice, or even fruit fly?
>>> But what about monkeys, mice or even a fruit fly?
The boundaries are blurred. Unavoidably, human beings are stronger than other animals, and the human\'s greed leads to use the weaker exists for their own good.
>>> The boundaries are blurred. Unavoidably, human beings are stronger than other animals, and human greed leads to the use of weaker exits for their own good.
I have known there are many regulations on animal experiment including the method of management, their funeral, the allowed kinds of experiment. We have to have the minimum of decency.
>>> correct
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