[Homework]190512

2019-05-14 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Q. How do you feel about the use of animals for medical research? A. I generally agree with the animal experiment except some brutal cases. I think generally It helps people investigate biological phenomena that can not be experimented with human such as genetics. The biological understandings are very important for people to prevent diseases and develop medicines. Naturally, experimenting on dogs or cats seems to be wrong. But what about monkeys, mice, or even fruit fly? The boundaries are blurred. Unavoidably, human beings are stronger than other animals, and the human\'s greed leads to use the weaker exists for their own good. I have known there are many regulations on animal experiment including the method of management, their funeral, the allowed kinds of experiment. We have to have the minimum of decency.

강사 첨삭

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Thank you for doing your composition. Keep moving forward.

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T. Lainey <\",)))><


I generally agree with the animal experiment except some brutal cases.

>>> I generally agree with the animal experiment except for some brutal cases.


I think generally It helps people investigate biological phenomena that can not be experimented with human such as genetics.

>>> correct


The biological understandings are very important for people to prevent diseases and develop medicines. 

>>> correct

 Naturally, experimenting on dogs or cats seems to be wrong.

>>> correct


But what about monkeys, mice, or even fruit fly?

>>> But what about monkeys, mice or even a fruit fly?


The boundaries are blurred. Unavoidably, human beings are stronger than other animals, and the human\'s greed leads to use the weaker exists for their own good.

>>> The boundaries are blurred. Unavoidably, human beings are stronger than other animals, and human greed leads to the use of weaker exits for their own good.

 I have known there are many regulations on animal experiment including the method of management, their funeral, the allowed kinds of experiment. We have to have the minimum of decency.

>>> correct

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