[Homework]190513

2019-05-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lainey

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Discrimination means larger group of people or organization put different value on a smaller people or organization. Sometimes, one man receives better attention while the other is received a bad opinion though the two people do the same things. I think the discrimination is not on my hand or on control. It is a kind of human nature and is like a animal\'s thing, and there are discriminations everywhere. We have to decide and behave first that I never discriminate someone.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] ^^

Happy Monday :)

T. Lainey <\",)))><

Discrimination means larger group of people or organization put different value on a smaller people or organization.

>>> correct

Sometimes, one man receives better attention while the other is received a bad opinion though the two people do the same things.

>>> Sometimes, one man receives better attention while the other receives bad opinions through both did the same things.

I think the discrimination is not on my hand or on control.

>>> I think discrimination is out of my control.

It is a kind of human nature and is like a animal\'s thing, and there are discriminations everywhere.

>>> It is a kind of human nature and is like an animal\'s thing, and there are discriminations everywhere.

We have to decide and behave first that I never discriminate someone.

>>> We have to decide for ourselves to never discriminate someone.

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