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2012-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

학생이 쓴 원문

I have no special plans for upcoming thanksgiving day. I prefer to hang out with my friends on weekends so I might be able to go somewhere like Ocean World to say good bye to summer.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday! I like your idea for this thanksgiving. It\'s nice and relaxing. How I wish I could do that, too. Anyway, may you have a charming Thursday. Take care and have a nice day!   I have no special plans for upcoming thanksgiving day. >> I have no special plans for the upcoming thanksgiving. I prefer to hang out with my friends on weekends so I might be able to go somewhere like Ocean World to say good bye to summer. >>I prefer to hangout with my friends on the weekends so we might be able to go somewhere like the Ocean World to say goodbye to summer.

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