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<Paris Croissant under probe for bullying franchisees > 1. Why are Hyundai Motors and Paris Croissant under investigation? Because, Hyundai and Paris Croissant illegally forced thier franchised shops to refurbish interior desings without any financial support. 2. What was the allegation against Hyundai? Hyundai illegally ordered to make their interiors without any support. 3. How many illegal orders did Paris Croissant allegedly make? They ordered 300 out of 3,200 franchised bakeries acorss the country, including some 150 stores that were pressured to relocate. 4. What did Hyundai representatives say about this case? How about Paris Croissant? Hyundai representatives denied the allegations, and just said "wait and see." Paris croissant representatives said, It wan not forced but agreed each other.

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