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yesterday i worte two texts already, but i didn't do yesterday's homework. There is the reason. What i wrote yesterday is old text that i had written before. Yesterday i had an appointment so i didn't have much time and i just copied the old text and uproaded except yesterday's homework. I went to the hongdae where young people are crowded and has lots of entertainment places including clubs, pubs and so on and also many foreigners have ramble on. Actually, "hongdae" means hong ik university whose art department is famous in Korea. University called in Korean "dae hak gyo", so we say "hong ik dae hak gyo", short called "hongdae".
I'm sure if you go to hongdae, you will love this place too. And all that was possible because today i don't go to my work. And plus in hongdae, i heard the song gangnam style that you said. kkk I'm very proud of the fact that you know that song and spotlighting to korean song all around world. This is yesterday's h/w. abdcb
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Hello there!!!!
HAPPY MONDAY!!!!
Hope you\'ll start your week with a big smile...^^
Anyway, I understand that you weren\'t able to do your homework on time but next time please don\'t re-use compositions that were already corrected okay? kkk I just hope you had fun in Hongdae. Of course I do understand that sometimes you also need some time off to blow off your steem. :)
Areas of Improvement:
>>> Please be very careful with your spelling.
>>> Always check your capitalization especially for proper nouns and beginning of your sentences.
>>> Always be consious of the tenses of your verbs.
P.S. Keep the positive energy for the whole week, okay? ^_______^
xoxoT. Cam-
yesterday i worte two texts already, but i didn\'t do yesterday\'s homework.
>>> Yesterday, I have written two compositions but I didn\'t do the homework.
There is the reason.
>>> There is a reason.
What i wrote yesterday is old text that i had written before.
>>> What I wrote yesterday was the old composition that I submitted before.
Yesterday i had an appointment so i didn\'t have much time and i just copied the old text and uproaded except yesterday\'s homework.
>>> Yesterday, I had an appointment so I didn\'t have much time and I just copied my old composition and uploaded it except for the homework yesterday.
I went to the hongdae where young people are crowded and has lots of entertainment places including clubs, pubs and so on and also many foreigners
have ramble on.
>>> I went to Hongdae where it is crowded with young people and has lots of entertainment places such as clubs, pubs and so on. Moreover, there were many foreigners there.
Actually, \"hongdae\" means hong ik university whose art department is famous in Korea. University called in Korean \"dae hak gyo\", so we say \"hong ik dae hak gyo\", short called \"hongdae\".
>>> Actually, \"Hongdae\" means Hong ik university whose art department is famous in Korea. A university is called \"dae hak gyo\" in Korean so we say \"hong ik dae hak gyo\" or \"hong\"dae for short.I\'m sure if you go to hongdae, you will love this place too.
>>> CORRECT!!!!! --- Just be careful with the capitalization.
And all that was possible because today i don\'t go to my work.
>>> Everything was possible because today I didn\'t go to work.
And plus in hongdae, i heard the song gangnam style that you said. kkk
In addition, In Dong hae, I heard the song Gangnam style that you told me. kkk
I\'m very proud of the fact that you know that song and spotlighting to korean song all around world. This is yesterday\'s h/w. abdcb
>>> I\'m very proud of the fact that you know that song and that a Korean song is getting the spotlight all over the world.
This is yesterday\'s h/w.
>>> This was my homework yesterday.
1.a
>>> CORRECT!!!
2.b
>>> a
3.d
>>> b
4.c
>>> b
5.b
>>> CORRECT!!!
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