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In my case, I prefer to live in a multiracial country. Because i wanna live in country that can coexist and admit diversity. That doesn't mean monoracial country can't admit diversity, i mean it is likely to have such tendency because human is social anmimal. The country where coexist diversity has more fresh things and so is atmosphere. With it, the multiracial country develop in every part more and faster than monoracial country. There is an example. U.S.A is the world best country that has multiracial. The best reason why usa has hegemony is, of course, war, but without acceptance of multiracial, there is no great power related to hegemony. On the other hand, in case of China that was a communist country, their conservative thought including do not import and export to abroad prevent from developing. Now, China is open the door and developing more and more. Pure monoracial country is nothing wrong, wrong is that keeping away from changing to multiracial.

Hi!!!!!! HAPPY MONDAY!!!! This one\'s a good one..You presented your stand clearly. Good use of some expressions and I like the vocabulary hegemony that you\'ve used... ^______^ Keep it up!!!!! Areas of Improvement: >> Study more vocabularies and their appropriate uses. >>Try to avoid using wanna in formal writings although it is accepted in spoken English. :) Keep practicing more my dear and in no time I know you will be the best English speaker ever!!!!!! See you soon...   xoxoT. Cam-   In my case, I prefer to live in a multiracial country. Because i wanna live in country that can coexist and admit diversity. >>> In my case, I prefer to live in a multiracial country because I wanna live in a country that can coexist and accept diversity. >>> Please use the conjunction but, properly. Also wanna is accepted but please try to use want to if you\'re writing a formal composition. That doesn\'t mean monoracial country can\'t admit diversity, i mean it is likely to have such tendency because human is social anmimal. >>> I didn\'t mean monoracial countries can\'t accept diversity, what I mean is they are likely to have such  tendency because humans are social animals. The country where coexist diversity has more fresh things and so is atmosphere. >>>A country where diversity coexists has more new things and better atmosphere. With it, the multiracial country develop in every part more and faster than monoracial country. >>>With it, multiracial countries develop in every part more and faster than monoracial countries. There is an example. U.S.A is the world best country that has multiracial. >>>For example, the U.S.A., the world\'s best country is multiracial.  The best reason why usa has hegemony is, of course, war, but without acceptance of multiracial, there is no great power related to hegemony. >>> The primary/main reason why the U.S.A.has hegemony is of course war but without the acceptance of diversity, there wouldn\'t be great power. On the other hand, in case of China that was a communist country, their conservative thought including do not import and export to abroad prevent fromdeveloping. >>>On the other  hand, in the case of China which is a communist country, their conservative thinking that includes not importing and exporting abroad prevents them from developing. Now, China is open the door and developing more and more. >>> Now, China has openned it\'s door so it\'s developing more. Pure monoracial country is nothing wrong, wrong is that keeping away from changing to multiracial. >>> There\'s nothing wrong with being a monoracial country, but what\'s wrong is keeping away from changing to multiracial.