Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.will
2.will be celebrated
3.didn't
4.were
5.didn't come
The advantage of having a neighbor is that we can share different culture and life
patttern so we can get a understanding of other life.
Shopping Centers
Coex Shopping Center is one of Korea's popular markets. It is located in samsungdong in seoul.
I often got to the shopping center for buying clothes,shoes,books at weekend.
Because there are pretty and good products also it used to give me a good atmosphere.
Some area have small shops. So people who like a small shop enjoy shop there.
Malls generally have many products and good facilites such a cafe, movie theather and restaurants.
The mall will be still popular. And maybe internet shopping centers will be loved.
강사 첨삭
\'You may never know what results come of your action, but if you do nothing there will be no result.\' -Mahatma Gandhi
I also hope that you had a blast this weekend Jenny. T[이름]k you for sending your answered homework. take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1.will
>> A. will study2.will be celebrated
>> C. will be celebrating3.didn\'t
>> B. haven\'t tried4.were
>> Correct5.didn\'t come>> CorrectThe advantage of having a neighbor is that we can share different culture and life patttern so we can get an understanding of other life.>> CorrectShopping Centers>> CorrectCoex Shopping Center is one of Korea\'s popular markets. It is located in samsungdong in seoul.>> Coex Shopping Center is one of Korea\'s popular markets. It is located in Samsungdong, Seoul.I often got to the shopping center for buying clothes,shoes,books at weekend.
>> I often go to the shoppping center for buying clothes, shoes and books in a weekend.Because there are pretty and good products also it used to give me a good atmosphere.>> Because they have pretty and quality products and the place gives a good atmosphere.Some area have small shops. So people who like a small shop enjoy shop there.>> Some areas have small shops so people can still enjoy shopping there.Malls generally have many products and good facilites such a cafe, movie theathers and restaurants.>> CorrectThe mall will be still popular. And maybe internet shopping centers will be loved.
>> The mall will still be popular and maybe internet shopping will also be loved by people.
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