Homework (194)
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How is education important to you?
I think education is important, but there are many things those are more important than education.
2. How did your first learn how to read?
I learned how to read in Kindergarden.
3. What are your responsibilities as a student?
Because I am a student, I must learn many things.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]! Thank you for doing your first homework this year!
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~Teacher Sheila
I think education is important, but there are many things those are more important than education.
>>I think education is more important but there are many things more important than education.
>>I think education is more important but there are many things more important than education.
I learned how to read in Kindergarden.
>>I learned how to read in kindergarten.
Because I am a student, I must learn many things.
>>CORRECT
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