Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. This job is too (stressful).
2. There's a lot of work, but I can (handle) it.
3. I was (hired) last month.
4. They (fired) two of my co-workers, and I'm afraid I might be next.
5. I work (at) sales.
6. My (communion) (= the time it takes me to get to work) isn't so bad.
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Hello Kelly.
Today's weather is sunny.
Do you know Korean singer PSY?
He is very famous singer like Lady GaGa.
Now he's song "Gangnam Style" is very hot issue in you tube.
He's dance is very funny.
If you don't know PSY, search in google and you tube.
Have a great Wednesday!
Bye.
From: Emily.
강사 첨삭
A fantastic Wednesday to you! Wow! Thank you for doing a great job in answering your homework. Keep it up! I can\'t wait to see you again. Smile always.:)
-T.Kelly
1. This job is too (stressful). >>Correct!2. There\'s a lot of work, but I can (handle) it. >>Correct!3. I was (hired) last month.
>>Correct! 4. They (fired) two of my co-workers, and I\'m afraid I might be next. >>Correct!5. I work (at) sales.
>> in6. My (communion) (= the time it takes me to get to work) isn\'t so bad.>> commute
*** COMMUNION means possession or sharing in common; participation----------------------------------------------------------------------------------Hello Kelly.
>>Correct!Today\'s weather is sunny.>>Correct!
Do you know Korean singer PSY?
>>Correct!He is very famous singer like Lady GaGa.
>>Correct!Now he\'s song \"Gangnam Style\" is very hot issue in you tube.
>> Now, his song \"Gangnam Style\" is a very hot issue in youtube.He\'s dance is very funny.
>> His dance is very funny.If you don\'t know PSY, search in google and you tube.
>> If you don\'t know PSY, you can search his name in google and youtube.Have a great Wednesday!>>Correct!
Bye.
>>Correct!From: Emily.
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