Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1.he could get a good mark in test
2.which way would you go?
3.if you came with me
4.her brother will clear the table
5.I'll go with you
Free Time
In my case, i have free time at night from Monday to friday. On weekend i usually have free time.
I Spend my free time with my friends for having fun.
I usally spend time with my friends and before my co- workers seeing movies and going to restaurants and going to travel.
In my country most of the people spend free time going travel, going park, going theathers, etc.
They spend free time enjoing their hobbies such a fishing, reading books and traveling.
Yes, Most people have free time during weekends and their own holidays from company.
강사 첨삭
'Success is the sum of small efforts, repeated day in and day out.' ~ Robert Collier
Hi Winnie. You know what, we have the same ways on how to spend our free time. I also love watching movies and traveling. But I really hope that I could travel more. Lets talk about this later. Take care.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1.he could get a good mark in test>> Correct2.which way would you go?>> Correct3.if you came with me>> Correct4.her brother will clear the table>> Correct5.I\'ll go with you>> CorrectFree Time>> CorrectIn my case, i have free time at night from Monday to friday. On weekend i usually have free time.>> In my case, I have a free time in the evening of weekdays and whole time during the weekends.I spend my free time with my friends for having fun.>> CorrectI usally spend time with my friends and before my co- workers seeing movies and going to restaurants and going to travel.>> I usually spend time with friends though before I used to watch movies. go to restaurants and travel with my co-workers.In my country most of the people spend free time going travel, going park, going theathers, etc.>> CorrectThey spend free time enjoing their hobbies such a fishing, reading books and traveling.>> They spend free time enjoing their hobbies such a fishing, reading books and traveling.Yes, Most people have free time during weekends and their own holidays from company.
>> Yes, most people have a free time during the weekends and every company holidays.
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