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2012-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lara

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1.The children play football in the garden. 2.We went to the cinema yesterday. 3.John almost fell off the bike. 4.Her boyfriend will probably buy her some flowers. 5.My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon. Interesting Building Last year i went to Paris. At that time, i saw a enterance of museum. It looks like a triangle cone such as a mountain. Inside museum i could see famous paintings, scruptures, maps of museum, equipment for explain. Old buildings influnce new buildings. New buildings should learn good points from old one. New buildings reduce energy costs. I think it depends on the old buildings. If it is a important historical building, it should protected.

강사 첨삭

'If you don't go after what you want, you'll never have it. If you don't ask, the answer is always no. If you don't step forward, you're always in the same place.' ~ Nora Roberts Good job on your answered homework Winnie. I hope that you will remain enthusiastic and eager to learn more. Take care and enjoy the coming days. Teacher Lara Here are my corrections for you: 1.The children play football in the garden.>> Correct2.We went to the cinema yesterday.>> Correct3.John almost fell off the bike.>> Correct4.Her boyfriend will probably buy her some flowers.>> Correct5.My uncle is definitely moving to Stockholm soon.>> CorrectInteresting Building>> CorrectLast year i went to Paris. At that time, i saw a enterance of museum.>> I went to Paris last year and there I saw a unique entrance of a certain museum.It looks like a triangle cone such as a mountain.>> It looks like a triangular cone such as a mountain.Inside museum i could see famous paintings, scruptures, maps of museum, equipment for explain.>> Inside the museum I saw famous paintings, sculptures, maps of the museum and equipments.Old buildings influnce new buildings. >> Correct New buildings should learn good points from old one. >> New buildings should learn good points from the old ones. New buildings reduce energy costs.>> New buildings can reduce their energy consumption.I think it depends on the old buildings. >> Correct If it is a important historical building, it should protected. >> Important historical buildings should be protected.

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