homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi, Nica
My birth day is in October.
Thanks for sying that in advance.
I put commas in the place that those seem to be placed.
1. There was no question that John's painting, a huge colorful and ugly mural was the worst entry in the art exhibit.
2. Werner von, Braun, Willy Ley and Edward Teller noted authorities in the field of rocket development have done much to guide the missile program of the United States.
3. Mr. [Name]'s ability to say the wrong thing at the wrong time is, I believe amazing.
4. Running around the house, the dog was abruptly stopped by a fence.
5. If the opposition should win, our candidate would never have any political future.
강사 첨삭
Well hello there, nice work on the commas here, I know that they are quite confusing, but more getting used to should do the trick.
Well advance happy birthday again, take care and see you in class =)
-T. Nica =)
Hi, Nica
>>> Correct
>>> OR: Hi Nica!My birth day is in October.
>>> My birthday is in October. Thanks for sying that in advance.
>>> Thanks for asking in advance.
>>> OR: Thanks for greeting me in advance.I put commas in the place that those seem to be placed.
>>> I put commas in places where they seem to be placed necessarily.1. There was no question that John\'s painting, a huge colorful and ugly mural was the worst entry in the art exhibit.
>>> There was no question that John\'s painting, a huge colorful and ugly mural, was the worst entry in the art exhibit.2. Werner von, Braun, Willy Ley and Edward Teller noted authorities in the field of rocket development have done much to guide the missile program of the United States.
>>> Werner von Braun, Willy Ley and Edward Teller, noted authorities in the field of rocket development, have done much to guide the missile program of the United States.3. Mr. [Name]\'s ability to say the wrong thing at the wrong time is, I believe amazing.
>>> Correct4. Running around the house, the dog was abruptly stopped by a fence.
>>> Correct5. If the opposition should win, our candidate would never have any political future.
>>> Correct
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