Homework

2012-09-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Punctuation Mark Exercise Place commas wherever they are needed in the following sentences. 1. There was no question that John's painting, a huge colorful and ugly mural was the worst entry in the art exhibit. 2. Werner von Braun Willy Ley and Edward Teller noted authorities in the field of rocket development, have done much to guide the missile program of the United States. 3. Mr. [Name]'s ability to say the wrong thing at the wrong time, is I believe amazing. 4. Running around the house the dog, was abruptly stopped by a fence. 5. If the opposition should win, our candidate would never have any political future.

강사 첨삭

Hello there.^^
I hope that you are having a great day.
I also hope that you were able to realize the importance of the punctuation mark, comma.
This simple, seemingly trivial punctuation mark actually aids us in our speech.
It directs us on our phrasing to make us more intelligible.
It is because when we speak too fast, we tend to eat our words; while when we speak so slow, we tend to bore our listener.
Have a great weekend!
_T.Nica^^
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Punctuation Mark Exercise
Place commas wherever they are needed in the following sentences.
1. There was no question that John\'s painting, a huge colorful and ugly mural was the worst entry in the art exhibit.
>> There was no question that John\'s painting, a huge, colorful, and ugly mural, was the worst entry in the art exhibit.

2. Werner von Braun Willy Ley and Edward Teller noted authorities in the field of rocket development, have done much to guide the missile program of the United States.
>> Werner von Braun, Willy Ley, and Edward Teller, noted authorities in the field of rocket development, have done much to guide the missile program of the United States.
3. Mr. [Name]\'s ability to say the wrong thing at the wrong time, is I believe amazing.
>> Mr. [Name]\'s ability to say the wrong thing at the wrong time is, I believe, amazing.
4. Running around the house the dog, was abruptly stopped by a fence.
>> Running around the house, the dog was abruptly stopped by a fence.
5. If the opposition should win, our candidate would never have any political future.
>> Correct

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