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Hello [이름], 

How are you and your wife?

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T. Jeny 

Seoul is one of the big city in all of the world. So, traffic jam is very serious especially, rush hour is not to mention.

>>Seoul is one of the biggest city in the world. Problems about traffic is very serious especially in rush hours. 

I think about the reason that first, we have a car manufacture company, Hyundai and Kia motor.

>>The first reason that I can think about is, Korea has a manufacturing company like Hyundai and Kia motors.

We can buy more resonable price than import car like BMW and AUDI.

>>We can but it in a reasonable price than other imported cars like BMW and AUDI.

Second, Korea GDP is so high that people can buy more many cars.

>>In addition, Korea\'s GDP, is also hight that\'s why people can buy more cars.

After all, that\'s the reason why the traffic jam happens.

>>This is the main reason why we experience traffic.

But, we have a very good quality system of bus and subway.

>>In the other hand, Korea has a  good quality system of bus and subway.

I heard many foreigners satisfy our those system. Especially, subway system , for foreigners, it has many language broadcasting system.

>>I heard that many foreigners are satisfied with our system, especially with our subway system, it has language broadcasting system.

They can speak English, Japanese, Chinases, French and Deutsch. It helps for their tour.

>>They can speak English, Japanese, Chinese, French and Deutsch, which is helpful for tourists.