Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
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Nature Scenery
For me, the most beautiful scenery is a sky of fall.
I saw the sky in Korea and London.
I went there with my friends.
I love Korea nature. Yes it is important to conserve the scenery because it give us good feelings and economic benefits.
Some people like to donate and other people like to go there so that they share the good memories.
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Teacher Lara
Here are my corcetions for you:
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>> Correct2.gone
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>> Correct5.went>> CorrectNature Scenery>> CorrectFor me, the most beautiful scenery is a sky of fall.>> For me, the most beautiful scenery is the sky in fall season.I saw the sky in Korea and London.>> CorrectI went there with my friends.>> CorrectI love Korea nature.
>> I love Koreas\' nature.
Yes it is important to conserve the scenery because it gives us good feelings and economic benefits.>> CorrectSome people like to donate and other people like to go there so that they share the good memories.
>> Correct
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