Homework
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Would you ever consider plastic surgery if a friend suggested it to you?
Recently, many Korean women want to have a plastic surgery. Plastic surgeon is one of the most preferred profession. Eight years ago, I visited a plastic surgeon, and had a very simple plastic surgery, removing moles. But this experience did not give me a good feeling. Now, I don't consider plastic surgery though a friend suggest it to me.
강사 첨삭
Hello Mr. [이름]! Oh, I didn't know that you underwent a surgery. Anyway Sir, I thank you so much for this information you just shared to me. We will talk more about this Sir in our class tomorrow. Haha! Enjoy your night with your family Mr. [이름].
-Teacher Chloe
Would you ever consider plastic surgery if a friend suggested it to you?Recently, many Korean women want to have a plastic surgery.
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Plastic surgeon is one of the most preferred profession.
>>Correct
Eight years ago, I visited a plastic surgeon, and had a very simple plastic surgery, removing moles.
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But this experience did not give me a good feeling.
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Now, I don\'t consider plastic surgery though a friend suggest it to me.
>> Now, I don\'t consider plastic surgery though my friend suggested it to me.
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