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The biggest economic problem in Korea is that our economic system is focused in abroad. So we're always affected by global economy recession. I think the reason is our domestic economy is not enough big. A lot of manufacture company wants to export their products. As you already know, Korea is so small country and our population is just 50 million. Let's think about Europe. I guess they are 1,500 million at least. If they can export, they can make lots of money of course. I know that domestic is 30%, others are all. That's the biggest problem. We should be more effort for horizontal economic system.

Hello there!  Be careful in constructing your sentences. You tend to jumble the words but the idea is there. Please read the corrections that I made today. ^^  Happy Tuesday! ^^ ~T.Jeny The biggest economic problem in Korea is that our economic system is focused in abroad. >>The biggest economic problem in Korea is that our economic system is focused abroad. So we\'re always affected by global economy recession. >>So, we\'re always affected by global economic recession. I think the reason is our domestic economy is not enough big. >>I think the reason is our domestic economy is not big enough.  A lot of manufacture company wants to export their products. >> A lot of manufacturing company wants to export their products.  As you already know, Korea is so small country and our population is just 50 million. >>As you already know, Korea is a small country and our population is just 50 million. Let\'s think about Europe. >>Let\'s talk about Europe. I guess they are 1,500 million at least. >>I guess they are at least 1,500,000 million. If they can export, they can make lots of money of course. >>If they can export, they can of course make lots of money. I know that domestic is 30%, others are all. >>I think that domestic exports is 30%, others are 100%. That\'s the biggest problem. >>CORRECT We should be more effort for horizontal economic system. >>We should put more effort to achieve a horozontal economic system.