Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. take on
2.look for
3.turn on
4.fill out
5.try on
TV Programs
For me i love to watch comedy dramas and movies.I usually watch TV at night.
Because it makes me happy and relaxes me. TV Programs can teach our children about rules of society.
Everything in the world has negative points.So it is nature to show bad things.
Yes for children, drugs abuse or smokings should be banned on TV.
강사 첨삭
'Everything you want is out there waiting for you to ask. Everything you want also wants you. But you have to take action to get it.' ~ Jules Renard
You\'re doing good in writing your composition Winnie so just keep it up and learn from your mistakes. Take care and talk to you soon then.
Teacher Lara
Here are my corrections for you:
1. take on
>> Quick! Get on the bus. It\'s ready to leave.
2.look for
>> Correct3.turn on
>> Correct
>> or It\'s dark inside. Can you switch on the light, please?4.fill out
>> Fill in the form, please. 5.try on>> CorrectTV Programs>> CorrectFor me i love to watch comedy dramas and movies.I usually watch TV at night.>> For me I love to watch movies and programs such as comedies or dramas on TV. I usually watch TV at nigth.Because it makes me happy and relaxes me. TV Programs can teach our children about rules of society.>> CorrectEverything in the world has negative points.So it is nature to show bad things.>> CorrectYes for children, drugs abuse or smokings should be banned on TV.
>> Yes for children, drug abuse or smoking should be banned on TV.
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