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2012-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 camille

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello^^ I should have been better prepared for the classes. I'm sorry. My level is low. So I leave much to be desired. But, next classes should have a good information. 1. Who is that woman? Why are you looking at her? 2. Do you know that man? Yes, I work with him. 3. I am talking to you. Please listen to you. 4. These photos are nice. Do you want to look at us? 5. I like that camera. I am going to buy it. good bye.

강사 첨삭

Hi baby, good afternoon.. Thank you so much for doing a great job.. And please dont say that your level is low. You are an amazing student and you keep on improving as time goes by.. SO baby just do your best and I am always here to help you improve your skills. Ajah!! Talk to you again tomorrow baby and take care always.. xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Hello^^I should have been better prepared for the classes. >>I should have prepared better for the classes.I\'m sorry. >>correctMy level is low. >>correct So I leave much to be desired.>>correctBut, next classes should have a good information.>>But next classes should be more informative.1. Who is that woman? Why are you looking at her?>>correct2. Do you know that man? Yes, I work with him.>>correct3. I am talking to you. Please listen to you.>>I am talking to you. Please listen to me.4. These photos are nice. Do you want to look at us?>>These photos are nice. Do you want to look at them?5. I like that camera. I am going to buy it.>>correctgood bye.

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