homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there! ^^ Happy Wednesday. Days are really running so fast. We are already in the middle of the week. Two days to go and well be having a long weekend! Wheeeee! Ha-ha. Anyway, you\'ve got a good opinion. You were able to express your ideas in this homework. Just be careful in constructing your sentences, you tend to jumble the words. Nevertheless, you did well. Good night! ^^
~T. Jeny
Korean, regardless of sex, over the 20 age, can vote anybody since 1988.
>>A Korean who is 20 years of age and above, regardless of the gender, can vote anybody since 1988.
Presidential election is released each 5 year.
>>The presidential election is held every after 5 years.
Actually, I didn\'t interest in politics but as my military service finished, I really interested in it.
>>Actually, I\'m not interested in politics but because of my military services, I was interested on it.
I think that people who don\'t vote any elections are very irresponsible for our future, for our children.
>>I think those people who don\'t vote are very irresponsible about the future and of our children.
They can\'t see more big picture for future.
>>They can\'t see the bigger picture of the future.
If we don\'t vote, many politicians don\'t be afraid citizen so they can spend our tax for their family, not keep their promise etc.
>> If we don\'t vote, many politicians won\'t be afraid to spend our taxes for their family, not to keep their promise, etc.
Do you want change? Vote! Period!
>>Correct or
>>Do you want a change? Vote! That\'s all!
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