homework :)

2012-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

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Good morning ,Louis! We have around two months since we have called the first. I saw your profile on the website. You are so young and cute~ Thank you for always your advice and encouragement~ I 'll talk to you afternoon~ HOMEWORK: 1. The headquarters of the United Nations is in New York. 2. In the most countries people drive on the right. 3. I usually buy a newspaper about my way to work. 4. Last year we had a lovely skiing holiday in the Swiss Alps. 5. San Francisco is located the west coast of the United States. 6. We got stuck in a traffic jam on the way to the airport. 7. The report about the accident was in the front page of the newspaper. 8. In the theatre we had seats of the front row. 9. Write the name and address in the front page of the envelope. 10. It's dangerous to play football on the streets. Are these correct?

강사 첨삭

Good morning, Iris!

Thank you for always making time to accomplish your homework. Please go over some of the items of your improvement. Anyway, thank you very much for those compliments! (especially for saying I'm young and cute! Hahahaha) Anyway, 2 months have passed and I am really glad to have you around as my friend. I hope I can see some of your pictures, too!!! See you later, Iris. Have a wonderful day!

-Louise-

Good morning ,Louis!

>> Correct.

>> Good morning ,Louise!

 We have around two months since we have called the first.

>> We have already been together for 2 months.

 I saw your profile on the website.

>> Correct.

 You are so young and cute~

>> Correct. Just use the correct punctuation mark.

>> You are so young and cute!

 Thank you for always your advice and encouragement~

>> Thank you for always giving me advice and encouragement.

 I \'ll talk to you afternoon~

>> I'll talk to you this afternoon.

 HOMEWORK:

1.     The headquarters of the United Nations is in New York.

>> Correct.

 2. In the most countries people drive on the right.

>> Correct.

 3. I usually buy a newspaper about my way to work.

>> On

 4. Last year we had a lovely skiing holiday in the Swiss Alps.

>> Correct.

 5. San Francisco is located the west coast of the United States.

>> On

 6. We got stuck in a traffic jam on the way to the airport.

>> On

 7. The report about the accident was in the front page of the newspaper.

>> On

 8. In the theatre we had seats of the front row.

>> Correct.

 9. Write the name and address in the front page of the envelope.

>> On

 10. It\'s dangerous to play football on the streets.

>> In

 Are these correct?

>> Correct.

 

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