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Nowadays, we have very serious problem that murder and rape. When I was under the 20 years, of course those crimes always happened. But, today it's very often happened. So, I strongly agree we should have more strong penalty that is kind of way for decresing murder and rape. Especially, women who are more weak than man have a fear of those crimes. We should potect by law at least.

Hi!Thank you for your composition. It was awesome. I admire you because you\'re updated with the news.I agrree that the law should protect the people. by all means.I commend you for a job well done this week.You were able to express your thoughts well.Have a nice weekend! Take Care! T.Jeny Here are my corrections for you: Nowadays, we have very serious problem that murder and rape. >>Nowadays, we have a serious problem about murder and rape. When I was under the 20 years, of course those crimes always happened. >>Before I turned 20 years of age, those crimes always happen. But, today it\'s very often happened. >>But today,it always happens. OR >>Today,crimes are often heard on the news.So, I strongly agree we should have more strong penalty that is kind of way for decresing murder and rape. >> So I think laws should impose stricter penalties for heinous crimes ao as to decrease the crime rate in our country. OR >>I strongly agree that the law should impose stricter penalties to decrease the number of crimes. Especially, women who are more weak than man have a fear of those crimes. >> Especially women who are known to be weaker than men full of fear on those crimes. We should potect by law at least. >> We should be protected by law by all means.