Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ms. [이름],
Chuseok is by far the biggest and most important holiday in Korea. It is a time when family members from near and far come together to share food and stories and to give thanks to their ancestors for the abundant harvest. I hope you had a great time!
~Teacher Verna~
1.I went ___to___ the gym.
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2.Matthew and Michelle moved the table _in_ the dining room.
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3.Allan left your keys __on_ the table.
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4.Dr. [Name] apologized for interrupting us and told us to carry __it____ with our discussion.
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5.I walk _to_____ the amusement park.
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I had a great Chuseok holiday with my family and relatives.
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I can\'t visit my parents-in-law often because they are living too far from my place.
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They are always missing their son\'s family, especially their grandson.
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I went there last Friday.
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Chuseok holiday was until monday, but many people have 3 holidays until wendsday straightly.
>>Chuseok holiday is only until Monday but many people have thress days holidays until Wednesday.
Because this wendsday is also national holiday, Gachongul, which is the day of foundation of Korea in our history, if they take off tuesday they can enjoy 3 days holiday straightly until wendsday.
>>Because this Wednesday is also national holiday, Gachongul, which is the day of foundation of Korea in our history, if they take off on Tuesday they can enjoy 3 days holiday straight until Wednesday.
We have a ceremony in the morning of Chuseok with devoting new producted crops to our ancector to thank for a good harvest traditionally.
>>We have a ceremony in the morning of Chuseok to offer new produced crops to our ancestor to thank them for a good harvest traditionally.
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