Homework 2.1
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you prefer spending time with your family or friends? Why?
: I prefer spending time with my friends. Because, our family always gather and talk at home. So, I want to spend more time with friends. It will be going to a unforgettable memory.
강사 첨삭
Hello Michelle! ^^
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I prefer spending time with my friends.
>> CORRECT!
Because, our family always gather and talk at home.
>> Because our family always gather and talk at home.
So, I want to spend more time with friends.
>> CORRECT!
It will be going to a unforgettable memory.
>> It will be an unforgettable memory.
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