Homework 2

2012-02-08 · 첨삭 강사 karen

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Rewrite each sentence. Change the noun or Proper noun to a pronoun. (I, you, he, she, it, we, they, you, him, her, them, it, us) 1. Sarah made dinner for the whole family. => She made dinner for the whole her family. 2. Tyler played tag with Miguel and Ramon. => He played tag with them. 3. Mr. [Name] went to the movies with Mrs. [Name]. => He went to the movies with her. 4. The house needs a fresh coat of paint. => It needs a fresh coat of paint. Yesterday I cooked Kim-chi until the midnight. So I was very tired when got up in the morning today. Cooking isn't easy but I have to cook for live.^^;; I hope to invent an automatic cooking machine someday..

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! How are you? I hope that you will have a good night sleep tonight ^^. Even though you cooked for a long time, it must have been delicous. I hope you will be successful in inventing an automatic cooker! Good night! ~T. Karen ^.^   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:  Rewrite each sentence. Change the noun or Proper noun to a pronoun. (I, you, he, she, it, we, they, you, him, her, them, it, us)  1. Sarah made dinner for the whole family.  => She made dinner for the whole her family. >> Correct!  2. Tyler played tag with Miguel and Ramon.  => He played tag with them. >> Correct!  3. Mr. [Name] went to the movies with Mrs. [Name].  => He went to the movies with her. >> Correct!  4. The house needs a fresh coat of paint.  => It needs a fresh coat of paint. >> Correct!  Yesterday I cooked Kim-chi until the midnight. >> Yesterday I cooked Kim-chi until midnight.  So I was very tired when got up in the morning today. >> Correct!  Cooking isn\'t easy but I have to cook for live.^^;; >> Cooking isn\'t easy but I have to cook to live.^^;;  I hope to invent an automatic cooking machine someday.. >> Correct!

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