Homework 2

HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Write a short composition about your New Year's plan. Wow! It is very difficult homework. Because I don't know I what to do. Also it's very shy to talk. But I once try it. First. I am studying now IELTS test, so I want to get score I want degree. Second, I am studying Spanish,too I have to pass the exam in may. Third, I am learning play guitar, end of this year I want to play guitar 'lucky' by Jason Mraz. Forth. I want to discover what I want in the future. It's very important for studying , living, and my whole life. Because a person who he(or she) knows what he wants do his best for studying and his lives. Lastly My aim of this year is never give up everything altough it's very hard or difficult.

Hi!! Thank you for your composition. You did great. See you in class later. Take care!^^   Here are my corrections:   HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:Write a short composition about your New Year\'s plan.Wow! It is very difficult homework. >> Wow! It is a very difficult homework.Because I don\'t know I what to do. Also it\'s very shy to talk.>> I don\'t know what to do and I also felt so shy to talk.But I once try it.>> But I\'ll try it.First. I am studying now IELTS test, so I want to get score I want degree.>> First, I am now studying for the IELTS test because I want to get a score and I want to have a degree.Second,I am studying Spanish,too I have to pass the exam in may.>> Secondly, I am also studying Spanish and I need to pass the exam on May.Third,I am learning play guitar, end of this year I want to play guitar\'lucky\' by Jason Mraz.] >> Third, I am learning to play the guitar and by the end of this year I want to play the song \"Lucky\" by Jason Mraz.Forth.I want to discover what I want in the future. >> Fourth, I want to discover what I want in the future.It\'s very important for studying , living, and my whole life. >> It is very important to study and live my whole life.Because a person who he(or she) knows what he wants do his best for studying and his lives. >> Because a person who knows what he/she wants, do best in his studies and his life.LastlyMy aim of this year is never give up everything altough it\'s very hard or difficult. >> Lastly, My aim for this year is to never give up on everything even though it\'s very hard or difficult.