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A horse knows when he is going to race. How does he know? His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.) He does not have a saddle on his back. He is being led, not ridden, to the grandstand. He is led under the grandstand into unusual, the special stall. The horse is nervous. Sometimes he does not know what to do when the starting gate flies open and the track is before him. If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him. During the race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him. Sometimes the jockey holds him back to save his energy for the last stretch. Eventually the horse gets to run as fast as he can. The exercise boy, watching owner's favorite jockey riding the horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing. Secretly, he is planning for the day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross the finish line.
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A horse knows when he is going to race. How does he know? His breakfast was scanty. (He is angry about that.)
>>> Correct!
He does not have a saddle on his back.
>>> Correct!
He is being led, not ridden, to the grandstand.
>>> Correct!
He is led under the grandstand into unusual, the special stall.
>>> an unsual, special stall
The horse is nervous.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes he does not know what to do when the starting gate flies open and the track is before him. If he does not begin to run instantly, other horses are already ahead of him. During the race, when he sees another horse just ahead of him, he will try to pass him.
>>> Correct!
Sometimes the jockey holds him back to save his energy for the last stretch.
>>> Correct!
Eventually the horse gets to run as fast as he can.
>>> Correct!
The exercise boy, watching owner\'s favorite jockey riding the horse he has exercised day after day, says nothing.
>>> Correct!
Secretly, he is planning for the day when he will be a jockey himself, and his horse will be first to cross the finish line.
>>> Correct!
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