homework 2/13
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning sir [이름]! I won’t be able to greet you tomorrow so let me do it now. Happy Valentines and Happy Seollal! I hope you will have some fun time with your family. While you are celebrating, I want you to take note of everything around you. That includes the activities, the people and things you can see. I need you to describe them to me next class. J See you!
1.a
>> Correct.
2.c
>> Correct.
3.b
>> d
4.a
>> Correct.
5.c
>> Correct.
Are there any wrong answers in this exam which I didn\'t try to find any words
by dictionary in first time?
>> Are there any wrong answers in this
exam which I didn’t find in the dictionary the first time?
At the second day night, My family and I went to famous sushi restaurant in
Ginja street.
>> On the second day of our stay in Japan, we went to a famous sushi restaurant along Ginia Street.
When we visited there, there were many people made a long queue that waited to be allowed entering inside. because the restaurant had been so famous in Korea through internet called Midori since 1910.
>> When we visited there, there was a long queue of people waiting to enter. I think that this is because the restaurant had become so famous in Korea through the internet since 1910. The restaurant is called Midori.
I thought that while wait to receive our order,visiting other place was better than waiting in front of the restaurant.
>> I thought that while waiting for our turn to order, we might as well visit other places. It was better than waiting in front of the restaurant.
After I decided,we started to walk the strange street through internet map.
>> After deciding that, we started walking in the strange street navigating through internet map.
finally we found narrow street where considered many small restaurants and Izakaya which called traditional japanese pop. continue...
>> Finally, we found a narrow street lined with many small restaurants. One is Izakaya which is a traditional Japanese pop.
continue...
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