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2016-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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1. The British explorer James Cook was born in the village of Marton, Yorkshire, on 27 October, 1728. But his family soon moved to another village, called Great Ayton, where Cook spent most of his childhood. 2. As a teenager James Cook developed a fascination for the sea and traveled to Whitby where he found employment on a coal ship. 3. While he was serving in the Royal Navy during the Seven Years' War (1756-1763), Cook had the command of a ship. 4. After the war ended, Cook took command of the vessel Grenville and went to Newfoundland to survey the coasts there. 5. While he was mapping the coasts of Newfoundland, he observed a solar eclipse off the North American coast.

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Hi there Sir [이름]! It is really good to know that you allot some time to make your homework. Thank you so much! I hope that you are learning something from the homework that I am giving you. See you tomorrow!   ~Teacher Shanee   1. The British explorer James Cook was born in the village of Marton, Yorkshire, on 27 October, 1728. But his family soon moved to another village, called Great Ayton, where Cook spent most of his childhood.>>> Correct!2. As a teenager James Cook developed a fascination for the sea and traveled to Whitby where he found employment on a coal ship.>>> Correct!3. While he was serving in the Royal Navy during the Seven Years\' War (1756-1763), Cook had the command of a ship.>>> Correct!4. After the war ended, Cook took command of the vessel Grenville and went to Newfoundland to survey the coasts there.>>> had ended5. While he was mapping the coasts of Newfoundland, he observed a solar eclipse off the North American coast. >>> Correct!

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