homework 2/19

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Please go over my corrections below.

Be mindful of the punctuation marks when writing. (Examples: point, comma, etc.)

They are very important to show the development of your sentences and ideas.

Always capitalize the beginning of a word at the start of your sentence.

These are just reminders. :)

T. Glenda

ESSAY QUESTION:
Should students be allowed to have cell phones in elementary and high schools? Why or why not?

i think the students should not be allowed to use their cell phones in elementary and high school
using a cell phone a lot can be bad influence on their studying hard and focusing their study in school as well
it means a kind of obstacle for all stuednts to study hard in school
especailly because most teenagers can\'t control easily their bad habit

>> I think, students should not be allowed to use their cell phones in elementary and high school. Using cell phone a lot can be a bad influence in studying hard and focusing on their studies.  It means, it\'s an obstacle for students to study hard especially, because most teenagers can\'t easily control their bad habit.   

 if using the phone is allowed in school, most students will use a phone as many as they can
because it is not easy for them to control the number of using the phone
as we know, most teenagers are usually apt to get bad habits and are not apt to control their bad habits
in conclusion, in my opinion
using a cell phone in school seems to have more disadvantages than advantages so it should be not allowed to use

>> If using of phones is allowed in school, most students will use a phone as much as they can
 because it is not easy for them to control when can they use it. In conclusion, using a cell phone in school seems to have more disadvantages than advantages so, it should be not allowed to be used in schools.