Homework 2.2
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Due to the ongoing pandemic, traveling becomes difficult and almost impossible. What do you miss most when you are traveling?
: I miss eating foods and viewing beautiful scenery with family or friends. But especially I feel sad that I can\'t make more memory with my friends in now age. I think memory in high school is so important and because it cannot be returned. But I can\'t go far away and can\'t watch great scenery with friends so it is so sad.
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I miss eating foods and viewing beautiful scenery with family or friends.
>> I miss eating foods and seeing beautiful scenery with my family and friends.
But especially I feel sad that I can\'t make more memory with my friends in now age.
>> But especially I feel sad that I can\'t make more memory with my friends at this age.
I think memory in high school is so important and because it cannot be returned.
>> I think memory in high school is so important and because it cannot be returned.
But I can\'t go far away and can\'t watch great scenery with friends so it is so sad.
>> But I can\'t go somewhere far and can\'t see great scenery with my friends which is so sad.
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