homework 2/21
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
CREATIVE ESSAY:
Do you find it easy to trust other people? Many people have a hard time trusting others. Maybe because someone broke their trust before. What characteristics do you look for in others before trusting them?
I also seem to have a trouble trusting others quickly.
>>Correct
I need enough time to trust others.
>>Correct
I usually trust others after looking for their characteristics such as thoughts and personalities and habits, etc.
>> I usually trust others after knowing their characteristics, thoughts, personalities and habits.
Those characteristics are very important for me to trust others
because I\'v been experiencing for a long time about people relationship and I\'m rather reserved and meticulous and serious
These are why I can\'t easily trust others
>> Those characteristics are very important for me to trust others. I\'ve experienced dealing with different kind of people for a long time. So, I\'m rather reserved, meticulous and serious in trusting other.
Thank you
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