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2018-02-22 · 첨삭 강사 Glenda

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: CREATIVE ESSAY: Do you find it easy to trust other people? Many people have a hard time trusting others. Maybe because someone broke their trust before. What characteristics do you look for in others before trusting them? I also seem to have a trouble trusting others quickly. I need enough time to trust others. I usually trust others after looking for their characteristics such as thoughts and personalities and habits, etc. Those characteristics are very important for me to trust others because I'v been experiencing for a long time about people relationship and I'm rather reserved and meticulous and serious These are why I can't easily trust others Thank you

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
CREATIVE ESSAY:
Do you find it easy to trust other people? Many people have a hard time trusting others. Maybe because someone broke their trust before. What characteristics do you look for in others before trusting them?

I also seem to have a trouble trusting others quickly. 

>>Correct
I need enough time to trust others.

>>Correct
 I usually trust others after looking for their characteristics such as thoughts and personalities and habits, etc. 

>> I usually trust others after knowing their characteristics, thoughts, personalities and habits.
Those characteristics are very important for me to trust others
because I\'v been experiencing for a long time about people relationship and I\'m rather reserved and meticulous and serious
These are why I can\'t easily trust others 

>> Those characteristics are very important for me to trust others. I\'ve experienced dealing with different kind of people for a long time. So, I\'m rather reserved, meticulous and serious in trusting other.

 Thank you

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