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2016-02-26 · 첨삭 강사 Shanee

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What do you think are the qualities of a good neighbor? I think a good neighbor must have a community spirit. Since a community spirits are a thought to live together, we should consider our neighbors first rather than our own self. Making noise late at night or throwing the trash away everywhere...etc are the behaviors to destroy the community. There is need a thought that something I hate is also my neighbors dislike.

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Hello there Sir [이름]!   Thanks for this. I read it and made some necessary corrections. I hope you can go over them. See you later!   ~Teacher Shanee   What do you think are the qualities of a good neighbor?I think a good neighbor must have a community spirit. >>> I think a good neighbor musth have community spirit. >>> OR: I think a good neighbor must demonstrate great communicty spirit.Since a community spirits are a thought to live together, we should consider our neighbors first rather than our own self. >>> Since community spirit promotes the thought to live together in harmony, we should consider our neighbors first rather than our own self/ourself. Making noise late at night or throwing the trash away everywhere...etc are the behaviors to destroy the community. >>> OR: Making noise late at night and throwing away trash every where are just examples of actions that can destroy the community.There is need a thought that something I hate is also my neighbors dislike. >>> We must keep in mind that what we hate might be disliked by our neighbors too.

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