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What do you do to improve your mood when you are in a bad mood?
When I am in a bad mood, the best choice is just to sleep early.
Without any thinking, after I sleep with a covers over my head, I feel so good and a bad mood is forgotten.
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What do you do to improve your mood when you are in a bad mood?When I am in a bad mood, the best choice is just to sleep early.
>>> Correct!Without any thinking, after I sleep with a covers over my head, I feel so good and a bad mood is forgotten.
>>> Without thinking and after sleeping with a cover over my head, I feel so good and my bad mood is forgotten.
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